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Romance
Posted: 9/29/2014 9:50 AM PDT
Here's a brief synopsis:
It's summer 1914 and the Thompson family are spending the holiday at their lavish estate in Cayuga, Ontario. Looming over their quiet and comfortable domestic life is a cloud of uncertainty as tensions in Europe reach a boiling point. For Andrew Thompson, impending war means separating from his beloved wife, daughter and two sons, who would be serving in the Canadian Military. Here Today is a story about love, loss and family during WWI, a time of bravery and sacrifice that will never be forgotten. 

I would absolutely love any feedback on this first chapter. I'm also not a WWI expert, so any advice is welcome. I promise there will be ROMANCE too!

http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=3ea2f708baa6456bac38ae0e9d913661&st=26176dd197804362b83adbd3...
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