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Posted: 7/28/2014 12:22 PM PDT
Hey, need feedback for my story The Beginning. It's a mystery, nonfiction story. i would really appreciate the feedback, see what I could do better. And if you comment, give me some advice, I'll do the same. Thanks! 
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