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Posted: 1/9/2014 10:48 AM PST
I'll take a look for you. However first read my disclaimer found on my profile, If you are still up for it I have two project that I could use advise on 

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Blood-War-Chronicles-Pandoras-Creed - This is Book 2

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http://www.webook.com/project/Blood-Wars-The-Angel-of-Death - This is Book 1
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Posted: 1/9/2014 9:44 AM PST
I could really use some feed back from different perspectives for my story. I will return the favor with honest and very detailed feedback for anyone who comments. This is the entire first rough draft. I know it need a lot of work. I just need opinions. Thank you. 



http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=ff243fecb2d1483c8e1c3efd338402a8&st=ee912de24abd485593e8b0d6...

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