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Posted: 2/2/2014 12:30 PM PST
Hello!

I have given you some quite negative feedback, and would appreciate the same back. I will continue to comment on your work. 

http://www.webook.com/project/Somewhere-2

Thank you!
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Posted: 1/30/2014 11:38 AM PST
Why you frowned at the screen in confusion as you read? Why it got you yawning? What got you into thinking; man this sucks!? Why you hated it? Why you would definitely NOT read chapter 2? 

There is always something in the writing; the horrible words used, the sentence structure, the idiotic characters, the stupid setting/location, the retarded dialog, or simply it is NOT Interesting.

Every story/writing have weakness and something that someone is bound not to like, and mine is no different. So tell me, truthfully,what you find in my story/writing that you disliked long before you reached the end of that first sentence, paragraph, or if I am lucky, the end of the chapter? 

Come and go through my written torment that is Chapter 1 Part 1 (cut in half for your own good and well-being) http://www.webook.com/project/Siels-Inferno-The-Black-Fire

In return I will give feedback to your work, discreetly of course.
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