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Posted: 3/14/2014 9:26 AM PST
I will read yours if you read mine. I will give you a detailed review if you do the same. Here is the link: http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=a1ce2d659dee4a80a5a99d61cfd0a069&st=5349c5fde34b409b9d6208b1...
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Posted: 3/3/2014 12:39 PM PST
This seems like an interesting story so far (I started reading the prolouge). I will give your my feedback when I'm finished reading. I would love some feedback on my sci fi, action/adventure novel as well.

It's only in it's infancy, but I would still love to get a sci fi fan's opinion on it so far.

http://www.webook.com/project/Project-Hellion
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Posted: 2/24/2014 12:32 PM PST
sure
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Posted: 2/24/2014 12:22 PM PST
If you don't like where it is going, would you let me know what is wrong?
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Posted: 2/22/2014 4:24 PM PST
I'll read your prologue. If i like where it's going, you'll get feedback from me on every chapter
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Posted: 2/13/2014 8:26 AM PST
Some thoughts would be nice. It's the rough draft. There are some grammatical errors that I know of would anyone be interested in giving some feedback. Just let me know, If you give you shall receive. 

Back to work on chapter 5

http://www.webook.com/project/Solar-Expansion-1
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