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Posted: 6/4/2014 11:48 AM PDT
Sorry, "Instincts" ****
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Posted: 6/4/2014 8:25 AM PDT
I uploaded another chapter to "Instincs" (previously known as "Laws of Attractions") not too long ago and I'd love for you to comment it! I'll of course read and give feedback on something of yours as well :) 

Sincerely, Shai


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Posted: 5/27/2014 5:00 PM PDT
I can't seem to find the project you are referring to...
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Posted: 5/24/2014 8:29 AM PDT
Okay I'll read your manuscript and give you feedback.
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Posted: 5/24/2014 7:38 AM PDT
Hi Jihae, that does sound like an awesome deal! I've written a fantasy novel called After the Fall , aimed at young adults. The first 3 chapters are up on WEbook and if you could take a look at 1 or all 3, I would hugely appreciate it! The URL is here: http://www.webook.com/project/AftertheFall

I'd be happy to give you feedback in return.

Thanks!
Paul.

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Posted: 5/23/2014 7:23 PM PDT
I am new to we-book and I would like you to read my manuscript Solstice Sacrifices.



http://www.webook.com/projects.aspx?pn=leelee12
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Posted: 5/23/2014 7:21 PM PDT
I am new to we-book and I would like you to read my manuscript Solstice Sacrifices.
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Posted: 5/23/2014 6:33 PM PDT
Read it over, loved it! I have only one project (my first as well) that I've been working on. You can look it over if you'd like ^_^
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Posted: 5/23/2014 6:18 PM PDT
Of course
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Posted: 5/23/2014 3:02 PM PDT
Hi! I'm new to this site and I just started my first project "Laws of Attraction" and I was wondering if maybe you could take a look on it and give me some feedback on my writingstyle and language, if you have time? Also, since English is my second language, it would be great if you told me about errors as I've probably made plenty... (if you want to help me that is!)

I also volunteer for reading whatever you want and give back some feedback aswell :)

Sincerely, 
Shai
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Posted: 5/23/2014 3:20 AM PDT
Hello! Could you please give feedback on my short story. This is an English translation of the original text in Russian. Any feedback will be much apreciated.
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Man-and-The-Angel
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Posted: 5/19/2014 7:01 AM PDT
Can you give me feedback for Part 1 and Part 2 of Chapter One. You've already read Chapter Zero. 
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Name-Of-This-Book-Is-A-Superstition-2
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Posted: 5/18/2014 6:10 PM PDT
Sure, no problem
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Posted: 5/18/2014 5:51 PM PDT
I just came up with a concept for a Sfi-fi story, not sure of the length or format yet i am just looking to get some feedback for the idea could you check it out and tell me if the concept is something worth pushing forward on.

http://www.webook.com/project/Untitled-work-In-Progress

Thank you
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Posted: 5/13/2014 6:27 AM PDT
http://www.webook.com/projects.aspx?pn=BrookeCassidy

Hey could you check this out please! You'd be the greatest. And then when you feedback on it, link your work I would love to check it out!
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Posted: 5/11/2014 7:15 AM PDT
Of course, I'll get right to it
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Posted: 5/10/2014 8:01 AM PDT
Would you mind reading a selection for my collection of short fiction? http://www.webook.com/project/Joy-1
I would love to return the favour as well. 

Best, 

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Posted: 5/2/2014 7:54 AM PDT
Alright, I'll look it over
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Posted: 5/1/2014 6:13 PM PDT
Some feedback on this one would be great, its a rather niche genre, military sci-fi. THanks in advance.
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Life-Smith

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Posted: 4/26/2014 2:52 PM PDT
Why thank you :) I actually only have one story, but aside from that, I'll look over Nobyls right now
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Posted: 4/26/2014 2:26 PM PDT
I would love some feedback on my new story "Nobyls," pertaining to mostly the concept and writing style, though other feedback is welcome. I was wondering if there was a specific story you wanted feedback on as well.
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Posted: 4/26/2014 1:54 PM PDT
I'm giving you guys an awesome deal here. I really want to go over other writing pieces although I'm not sure which ones to go over. If you comment back and specify which piece you want me to review, I'll give you feedback for free. Although I'd like feedback in return, you don't HAVE to. :)
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