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Posted: 11/27/2016 10:08 PM PST
Hello! I'm looking for feedback on my 1-page and 5-page submission. (And I will return the favor! -- just make sure to link your project).

In God World, a coming-of-age story about a boy exploring the world's first full-immersion virtual reality universe, freshman Ren Saito battles with evil gods and the nature of reality when he finds out that life, love, and death in a virtual world are surprisingly real. 

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