I was hoping I could get someone to read and give me some feedback on my prologue. Anything would be good from spelling mistakes to view on the story. An if you know anyone who could help me edit this I would love to hear from you. http://www.webook.com/project/Between-Two-Worlds-1
I know the description is not very good due to the fact that I had written it before I knew where I wanted to take the story.