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Posted: 11/10/2008 6:28 AM PST
Hi Arm_B ----I have just visited your site and there are chapters listed, but when they are opened there is no text displayed. This is not a complaint restricted to your site, I find it all to commmon on this forum. It is hard to critique something that one can not acess.
Talk to you a soon---ablelaz.
Posted: 11/9/2008 12:45 PM PST
For all you "But Gods Eat Grapes" fans I have revised my first five chapters and the rest is yet to come. The characters are deeper, the plot more compelling, and grammar much more grammatically correct. : ) I look forward to any feedback and more will be coming again soon.