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Posted: 1/9/2014 2:27 AM PST
Mischa

I will have a look at your work as I enjoy reading crime

I only ask that you do the same 

Regards

RB

http://www.webook.com/project/Blood-Wars-The-Angel-of-Death
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Posted: 1/9/2014 2:23 AM PST
Hi EMJ093

I'll take a look 

My only request is that you reciprocate

http://www.webook.com/project/Blood-Wars-The-Angel-of-Death

Also - Do not go on about grammar and spelling, these are being looked into already. I am after the story itself.

Regards

RB


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Posted: 1/8/2014 1:29 PM PST
Hello! I gave you some feedback on your first chapter and would appreciate the same. Be as brutal as you can please!

http://www.webook.com/project/Somewhere-2

Thank you!
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Posted: 1/7/2014 6:24 PM PST

Hello, Ali. I will read you things and post feedback if you will read my two chapters I've posted so far in the Logs of Kristen story. Just give honest feedback, and feel free to quote me on what needs to be fixed. Don't feel shy and don't feel obligated to tell me "it's good". If you think it's good, great! But tell me what I'm doing right then so that I know what to do to keep my audience's attention. If you think it's horrible, good! Tell me what I can do better. Sound fair? I promise to do the same to yours.

-Kitt

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Posted: 1/7/2014 6:36 AM PST
Hi All! I'm new to this site and I would love any feedback on my Novel - When Past and Present Collide. I'll gladly return the favour.
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