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I will have a look at your work as I enjoy reading crime
I only ask that you do the same
I'll take a look
My only request is that you reciprocate
Also - Do not go on about grammar and spelling, these are being looked into already. I am after the story itself.
Hello, Ali. I will read you things and post feedback if you will read my two chapters I've posted so far in the Logs of Kristen story. Just give honest feedback, and feel free to quote me on what needs to be fixed. Don't feel shy and don't feel obligated to tell me "it's good". If you think it's good, great! But tell me what I'm doing right then so that I know what to do to keep my audience's attention. If you think it's horrible, good! Tell me what I can do better. Sound fair? I promise to do the same to yours.