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Posted: 9/5/2014 11:47 AM PDT
Shai I would love to read the first chapter of instincts. Would you mind reading the first chapter of Pandora's Demons? 
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Posted: 9/4/2014 1:35 PM PDT
Hi, reading your work now, please give me some advice on my project called Snow
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Posted: 8/12/2014 8:32 PM PDT
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Posted: 8/7/2014 1:44 PM PDT
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Posted: 8/7/2014 12:34 AM PDT
read and gave feedback, check out Battle Monk
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Posted: 7/26/2014 5:53 PM PDT
Just reviewed your work :)
Would you be able to review my short story called Ash. I know it's quite bad, but any help would be appreciated for my story.
Thanks!
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Posted: 6/23/2014 2:51 AM PDT
Hey i read your story and posted a feedback, could you do the same for my first chapter of The Third Race? c:
thank you so much :)
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Posted: 6/15/2014 6:19 AM PDT
If you read and give me feedback on my first chapter of Instincts (not the prologue) I will read whatever you want me to read and do the same.
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