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Posted: 8/15/2015 9:15 PM PDT
Hi there! As the title says, I would love to get some feedback for my own story, The Tale of Morin, and I'm willing to critique your own in exchange. My feedback will be detailed and will cover all five points a critique should; General, Plot, Character development, Structure, and Tone. I will also read and review everything you've got written, and I hope you'll do the same for me if you genuinely enjoy the story. If you don't, well just tell me what you don't like about it and if you'd like, I'll still review yours. This offer is only for fellow Fantasy or Sci-fi writers as those are the genres I most enjoy reading and feel I've got the necessary tools to give a thorough review. 
Here are two different links to two different sites (including this one) where you can read my novel. There's a prologue and five completed chapters so far.
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Tale-of-Morin
https://www.wattpad.com/154259914-the-tale-of-morin-prologue



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