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Posted: 1/27/2017 7:50 PM PST
I should actually let you know that I updated the first 2 chapter. and its not exactly the same this time around. I will post the updated versions as soon as possible :D
Posted: 1/27/2017 12:53 PM PST
Read your story, i hope you continue writing it, looking foward to it.
Posted: 1/19/2017 7:58 PM PST
I have the start to my fantasy story posted here. Its called Mortal Odyssey.
Its about an adventure that a pair of elemental twins set out on. It starts out about revenge but quickly turns into something much worse. http://www.webook.com/project/Mortal-Odyssey-3
I hope you enjoy :D