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Posted: 9/6/2011 7:04 AM PDT
http://www.webook.com/project/Just-my-luck-1 I have 6 chapters! I'd be happy to give your story feedback!
Posted: 8/31/2011 10:41 PM PDT
i will start reading your story tomorrow. if you would be so kind as to look at mine i'll leave a link, btw the character named E.J. is gay but I haven't explored that yet in this story; mine is only a short story.
the link: http://www.webook.com/project/Kiss-the-Joy
Posted: 8/31/2011 7:22 PM PDT
Hey! Would be glad to swap feedback with you! My story is fantasy related but actually two of the main characters (both girls) are together so I'm totally open to that genre (Actually my favorite story couple of ALL time is Pippa/Felicity from A great and terrible beauty)
Posted: 8/31/2011 3:39 PM PDT
So, here's the thing. I'd really love your feedback on my story here! I haven't been working on it for a while, but I'm like half-way through finishing it. But a few things before you get started (well, IF you get started)
~I'd love to know what kinds of stories my readers write so feel free to leave on comment (on here or on the comment section on one of my chapters) with ONE OF YOUR stories and I'd be more than happy to check it out!!!!!
~This book is a homosexual story about two girls! so if you are not into that sort of thing just go back to the forum page and look for another story to give feedback to.
And I believe that is all I need to say for now :) Thanks ahead of time guys!
Here's the web address: