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Posted: 1/9/2014 10:45 AM PST
I have just started a new novel in the Blood Wars Chronicles. Looking for a bit of feedback is anyone is interested. I only have the First Paryt and Prologue, so not a lot. But want to make sure it is right.

I give warning that unless you look at the Angels of Death Story, you might think this is lacking in some areas, but still, see what you think. I am also happy to return the favour


http://www.webook.com/project/The-Blood-War-Chronicles-Pandoras-Creed
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