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Posted: 9/16/2017 8:53 AM PDT
I would really appreciate any feedback anyone could give me on a surreal/fantasy short story I'm currently working on. I'll return the favour by giving feedback to something you have written as well. You can request a specific work if you have more than one - just comment to this post with the link to the work you would like me to look at; although I cannot promise I am versed enough to give valid, eloquent feedback ^^; but i'll do my best.

Thank you!

Synopsis: A strange young woman finds herself between nostalgia and displacement, with ghostly forms of remembrance, as she's pulled by an inexplicable force towards an innate purpose. Sheโ€™s drawn to an odd place; a town where she feels the subject of her goal resides and where she might realise the connection it has to her as well as the nature of her existence.
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