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Posted: 9/16/2017 8:53 AM PDT
I would really appreciate any feedback anyone could give me on a surreal/fantasy short story I'm currently working on. I'll return the favour by giving feedback to something you have written as well. You can request a specific work if you have more than one - just comment to this post with the link to the work you would like me to look at; although I cannot promise I am versed enough to give valid, eloquent feedback ^^; but i'll do my best.

Thank you!

Synopsis: A strange young woman finds herself between nostalgia and displacement, with ghostly forms of remembrance, as she's pulled by an inexplicable force towards an innate purpose. She’s drawn to an odd place; a town where she feels the subject of her goal resides and where she might realise the connection it has to her as well as the nature of her existence.
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