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Posted: 1/21/2014 5:02 AM PST
I have placed a chapter for your analysis.

I will look at yours as well and see if I can see anything worth pointing out.

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Posted: 1/20/2014 8:49 PM PST
hello everyone if you are wanting great and gentle feed back on your story go to and look for Novel and short story analysis add a Chapter or section of a story, we will give you honest and gentle feedback and will give writing advice and you can do ours the same way you can give feed back and writing advice as well, My partner and I done this because we are both writers as well to us its all about Authors helping authors, and in our opinion that is the way it should be.
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