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Posted: 1/24/2014 5:50 PM PST
You could explain what her life is at the moment, did the incident occur at that instant or has it been some time. Give depth in why she believes that she is no longer alive and why Emmett will be a big impact.
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Posted: 1/22/2014 2:35 PM PST
What about Emmett makes her change her thinking or is it something he did? What caused him to do whatever he did? Is there a reason why this happened? What consequences are there, if any? 
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Posted: 1/22/2014 12:18 PM PST
I need your opinions and ideas of where to go next on my book....here is a short summary of it...
Ava doesn't know what to do now. All of her family and freinds have been changed. She's the only person she knows that is alive, and even she's beginning to doubt herself. Until she meets Emmett. Thank You!
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