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Posted: 10/25/2015 12:20 PM PST
I appreciate you reading the first chapter of my story and I appreciate the feedback. I checked out your screen play and gave some feedback and I hope its helpful.
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Posted: 10/25/2015 2:30 AM PST
Me and my fiancé are writing a new screenplay called "Dream Invaders". We only have the first scene up from the first episode, but I'd really appreciate it if someone could come in and look at the formatting and give honest feedback. I'll read a chapter from whatever story you want me to and give feedback on it if someone will give feedback on my screenplay. Thanks!
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