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Posted: 3/14/2017 8:09 AM PST
Of course, i am willing to read any of your short stories in return for reading mine :)
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Posted: 3/14/2017 7:58 AM PST
I hope you enjoy this one. its a very strong short story, of 10 pages, set in a unique fantasy world. i'm looking for feedback on themes, character development, and style. do tell me which parts i can do without.
Its on Google Docs. I have enabled editing.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QzzQgwig7HcnjoJMTn--qiJCDVZ0_6--pvYPApWUNWw/edit?usp=sharing

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