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Posted: 12/11/2013 10:54 AM PST
Hey guys, Just posted my first project called "Inner Fire". After many false starts i have finally settled into a good story plot and would love to see what you guys think. Let me say up front i am sorry. I know it is still a little rough around the edges. I am working night and day on the revised version to clear up the grammer failings. thanks for the look.
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