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This place basically works on give and take relationship as housedad once said. If you want someone to read your story, then you'll have to payback the favor and help in return. That's how it works.
Also, about selling projects, you can't talk about it as it is a general thing, cause it isn't. Different people like different things. Just because you won't be interested in buying her book, doesn't mean nobody would be interested. So shush!
I have returned to this site for heck knows what reasons, cause forums are pretty much dead and there's barely anything going on here. I have deleted every story I have worked on, cause it was OLD work, outdated and I'll never complete them. My writing style has changed a lot in last 4+ years. Aside with that...if you can't help, walk away. Stop being a prick. The world is full of pricks enough as it is.
This book isn't for me, but it's not for anyone. Of course people will always get angry when told their descriptive and explanatory skills are lacking, and doubly angry when told they are being selfish and having bizarre expectations for other people to do things for them without even asking nicely and offering to provide similar services in return, but I don't really mind since that anger is really only a just punishment.
See, if I had read your story and delivered similar criticism you would only have similarly burst into petulant tears and ignored all my helpful advice, so it looks like I've handily saved myself a lot of wasted effort. How efficient!
Reporting me is a bad idea since I'm only being candid. Any unbiased observer can see.
You'll progress more as a writer when you lose the emotional attachment to your doings and accept criticism of what you have done graciously. You'll learn how to express yourself and develop a greater ability to convey what you are describing when your skin thickens and your head thins.
Couldn't you just say that the book wasn't for you, no you go that they'll throw it in someone's face. What's wrong with you! You're so mean! I mean I read your message and cried after words you are disgusting, disgusting and rude leave me alone and I'm reporting you you sick jerk! You should feel bad not me you!
To become a writer one must firstly be able to write. What is writing? It's a method of communication. For communication to be successful it must be clear and concise whilst sticking closely to protocol - i.e. you must be clear and have good grammar.
So, I feel like I should point out that most of your post is essentially an opaque ramble rather than a description. I have no idea what 'jkms' is. A popular group of what? I'm already confused and I'm not sure why I should care about these characters. Basically you're not piquing my interest at all.
So if you can't even sell it to me, as a nobody, how are you gonna sell it to an agent who sees an inbox full of this shit every day? And a publisher? How about if a person in a book shop read this nonsense as a blurb? They'd put your book down instantly. They might even throw it at the cashier in rage! Think of the poor cashier!!
Another problem is a clear misunderstanding of human nature. It is not in the nature of a human being to review someone else's work for no reason without any promise of some kind of remuneration. Why should I read your story? You haven't offered me anything at all. Not even a promise to read a single chapter of my novel (if it existed).
Come back when you don't feel entitled to free help. Then you can have some more advice on why your writing is bad and you should feel bad.