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Posted: 12/4/2014 8:59 PM PST
placed perfectly around the tooth, Eli gripped the handles firmly with his
right hand and squeezed hard, left hand on placed on their forehead. He looked
into Zack’s eyes and pulled as hard as he could. A large pop followed by
screams of agony and the sound of the tooth bouncing across the dining room
floor came shortly after.
mother fuckers!” Zack yelled through his
sobs and groans.
“We will be
back in a week. If you don’t have our money we’ll cut off your left ear with
this” Eli picked up a butter knife from the kitchen table they were sitting at
and displayed it for Zack to see.
“I swear to
Christ ill have your money, I swear to Christ I’ll have it.”
him Lex.” Eli’s attention shifted to his understudy who was quickly fumbling to
cut the zip ties from Zack’s hand and the kitchen chair.
I was thinking sushi.”
you want man, whatever you want.” Lex replied. He was not yet desensitized to
the work at hand, his stomach was turning and he struggled to think about food
but wouldn’t say no to Eli who was looking back at Zack now. Placing a hand
under his chin and lifting his head up to make eye contact Eli stated,
your family. They should be back next week and I don’t think they’d enjoy our
his newly freed hands in the air and bowed his head and sobbed as if asking for
“You’ll have the money.”
“I hope so.”
Eli peeled off his bloody latex gloves only to reveal another pair underneath,
he placed them into a plastic sack and nodded his head to Lex, signaling that
it was time to go. Lex finished packing the tools into his duffle and they
headed for the door. Once in the car Lex looked at Eli who was focused on the
road and asked,
doesn’t affect you at all?”
his eyes on the road, replied
used to it.” He knew he had just told a lie, more specifically the same lie
that was told to him 4 years ago by Lex’s Uncle Andrei. He had to lie. He
couldn’t tell him the truth. He couldn’t tell him about the nightmares and the
long stares in the mirror or the suicidal thoughts and the drugs he’d use to
suppress his thoughts and emotions. He couldn’t tell him all the horrors that
come with working for his uncle, working for the Russian family.