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Posted: 4/30/2014 1:06 PM PDT
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Posted: 4/30/2014 1:04 PM PDT
Anyone willing to give me feedback and a rating for the first chapter of my book can do so at the link http://www.webook.com/project/The-Name-Of-This-Book-Is-A-Superstition-2
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Posted: 3/19/2014 12:33 PM PST
Hi I will review your story if you review mine. Feedback to feedback http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=a1ce2d659dee4a80a5a99d61cfd0a069&st=5349c5fde34b409b9d6208b1...
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Posted: 3/3/2014 1:45 PM PST
I'm not exactly sure what to categorize this story as. It has strong sci fi elements and action, as well as teenage characters, with some small bits of romance. I don't know if it should be categorized as YA; I really don't want to have to tone down anything down. I just want to write what I think would make a great story, YA or not.

I would love to receive some feedback from fans of any of the above mentioned genres. Please be as specific as possible with feedback. If you like it, describe what you liked about it. If not, please explain why in a constructive way.

I will read your work and give feedback in exchange. Thank you!

~Anna Landon
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