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Posted: 12/17/2014 12:28 AM PST
I'm in the process of writing the first book I've ever written and I could use some help with revision. I tend to both add in too many details and leave out important details at the same time, making the whole story jump around a lot. I have a lot of good ideas for this story and I want to make sure that the readers are getting all of the information I need them to get without it being too much or uninteresting. I will try my best to do the same for you, too. Thank you :)