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Posted: 7/19/2009 10:38 PM PDT
I haven't read your book yet. I'll set aside some time to though. To answer your question, It should be fine to have two narrators. Of course, I haven't read it yet but, I'll get back to you on this. Have a nice day. ☻
Posted: 6/26/2009 2:59 AM PDT
I'm currently writing a new novel, it was fine in the first few lines but there was this problem--- I haven't noticed I have been using two narrators, First is me and the second one is the main character. I'm not really sure how to detail everything, if you like you can check the project I'm talking about and get back here in this thread to tell me what do you think is the problem.
Here is the url (by the way the story is still under construction)