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Posted: 3/11/2014 1:05 PM PST
http://www.webook.com/project/The-fires-of-redemption
Here is my story. Please give it a good review (as in what I can do to improve it).
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Posted: 2/9/2014 12:24 AM PST
Feedback for feedback. Please be as in depth as possible. What do you like and what do you hate? http://www.webook.com/project/The-Fourth-Wall
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