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Posted: 2/28/2015 8:04 PM PST
I was wondering if any of you guys would be kind enough to review what I have so far in my story. I mean it's not much right now but I would like if you guys gave critique. (Warning: Strong violence with some cursing. Although nothing you guys can't handle, right?)

Link: http://www.webook.com/project/Artillero
Yeah, the link has the title I used to have for it. I changed the title this morning. Weird, but what are you gonna do?
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