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I'm not looking for nuke warm criticisms. If you like it, tell me what you liked, what stood out to you? If you don't like it, tell me where I should focus on and improve. This isn't perfect, there is bound to be one or two grammar errors. Focus on content, characters, dialogue, exposition, etc. Tell me what your impressions are. Give me solid feedback, and you are sure to get a long feedback from me in turn.
Thank you for your time. Again, interested, post below,and a invite will be sent. Also, please post links to your projects too. I like reading Fiction, tales of mystery of unique, obscure worlds, and Science Fiction. Not a huge fan of paranormal, but bring me something that grips me, you will have me for the long haul. Not big of Slice of Life or Romance/Drama. I want to read something interesting, with worlds unlike my own.
Once more, thank you for your time. Hope I will impress you as much as you will impress me.