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Posted: 5/1/2011 10:50 AM PDT

scott4323
Have the brake lines cut or something done to the engine. Is this helpful.
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Posted: 4/25/2011 6:37 PM PDT
I'm totally stuck after the last chapter I wrote and that was WEEKS ago. In the last chapter one of my main characters was in a car accident and woke up in the hospital. Her mom died in the crash and it wasn't really an accident, the car was destroyed in an attempt to kill both of them. She wakes up in the hospital then chapter ended. The other POV the story follows her best friend who is at her bedside when she wakes up. Anyone have any advice on whose POV should be next? Or what should happen? I don't know if I want to go to the mother's funeral with one character briefly explaining how she found out the other was in the hospital, or if I should write how that character found out the other was in the hospital.
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