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Posted: 1/8/2014 1:22 PM PST
I would love some honest feedback, at least on my first chapter!

http://www.webook.com/project/Somewhere-2

Thank you!
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Posted: 1/8/2014 3:48 AM PST

Hey Westy,

I posted a few chapters of my novel "Breaking Addiction" and would really appreciate some honest opinions on my writing and some tips if you have any.

Thanks


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Posted: 1/4/2014 5:19 PM PST

Hey! I'm new here as well. I was hoping for some feedback on my story. I'm still not done imputing the other chapters but I will keep adding to it. I just want some thoughts. And if you have stuff you want some feedback on, just say so. Thanks!!

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Past-is-Present

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Posted: 12/31/2013 12:56 PM PST
I'll read yours if you read mine http://www.webook.com/project/What-Doesnt-Kill-You-1
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Posted: 12/30/2013 5:14 PM PST
Hey, I'm kinda new here actually, and I'm feeling a little discouraged about my story, so if you could take a look at it, that would be great! It's called Shadow, and I think it's a pretty unique idea, I've never read anything like it, so it's very original, but I would love to hear your feedback.
http://www.webook.com/project/Shadow-14
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Posted: 12/22/2013 2:11 PM PST
I'll give feedback, could you give some back?


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Posted: 12/22/2013 9:38 AM PST
Hi could you maybe take a look at my story?
It's called Rax Philinside: The Devils Demon Hunter

http://www.webook.com/project/Rax-Philinside-The-Devils-Demon-Hunter

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Posted: 12/13/2013 8:02 AM PST
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Posted: 12/13/2013 8:01 AM PST
I'll make sure to check it out and leave feedback. I was wondering if you could do the same? Link below




http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=cae678b1ea8b4b2699615543517efc57&st=314db83852ae410ba63fc750...

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Posted: 12/12/2013 4:43 PM PST
Just posted today, a short story (less than 5,000 words) entitled "The Feminist Theory of Lennox M. Wright's Whorehouse." If you would like to check it out, I'd super appreciate it! :D

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Feminist-Theory-of-Lennox-M-Wrights-Whorehouse
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Posted: 12/10/2013 11:52 AM PST
 http://www.webook.com/project.aspx?url=The-angel-of-death-4 
Read this this is one of my favorites.  
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Posted: 12/10/2013 10:59 AM PST
http://www.webook.com/project/unpredictable-1 mind checking mine?
im not understanding a thing in here,i really do need help sow please?
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Posted: 12/4/2013 9:53 PM PST
Sounds awesome. Could you please give my work a look over? its called When Lightning Strikes,

heres the link: http://www.webook.com/project/When-Lightning-Strikes
please and thank you
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Posted: 11/30/2013 7:35 AM PST
If anyone can provide feedback for my work "The Vampire's Tutor," I would really appreciate it. I plan on putting up more chapters, but am new here, so I am still learning how to navigate this site. I can certainly provide feedback for anyone looking for it. Thanks!
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Posted: 11/29/2013 6:37 PM PST
I'm new and would love some feedback. My story is only about 500 words, so not too long. Here's the link: http://www.webook.com/project/The-Voices-Never-Heard
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Posted: 10/31/2013 12:15 AM PST
http://www.webook.com/project/Dark-Paradise please read and review my work i have 3 chapters up
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Posted: 10/17/2013 6:23 PM PDT
I would LOVE some feedback... just submitted my first project on WeBook and anxious to get the ball rolling. I'm only two (short) chapters in, but would appreciate helpful critiques. One rule: NO sugar coating, please. I will be happy to return the favor. Cheers!

http://www.webook.com/project/A-Beige-Romance-2
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Posted: 10/14/2013 10:36 AM PDT
Hi guys...

Newbie here....

Would appreciate if someone could give me feedback on my first ever fantasy novel...

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Five-Slot-Key

Thanks people

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Posted: 9/9/2013 9:26 AM PDT
If you are up for reading a 'short' novel feel free to peruse mine.

Here is the link

http://www.webook.com/project/Blood-Wars-The-Angel-of-Death

I am aware of the spelling and grammar issues and I am slowly working through these.

But could use some insight after chapter 1 lol
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Posted: 9/8/2013 9:21 AM PDT
Maybe check out my short story? I only have one up and It's a very quick read!
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Posted: 7/31/2013 2:09 PM PDT
Hey, I know you said you get bored with Sci/fi but i need a honest opinion. Here is the link to my project and first 3 chapters. Let me know what you think. http://www.webook.com/project/Enyei
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Posted: 7/25/2013 6:17 PM PDT
"This Project Leader has chosen to be the only author for this project and has not yet made a submission. Check back later to give feedback and rate."
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Posted: 7/25/2013 12:00 PM PDT
Hi, also new and just want someone to read my first chapter (its only 900 words) and let me know what they think.
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Posted: 7/21/2013 5:21 PM PDT
I have the first two chapters complete for my project, The Truths About Love, and Id like it if you'd read them. You don't have to give detailed feedback or any feedback at ll, but Id definitely be grateful, as well as give you feedback on a project in the future. If you decide to give it a read, thank you. If you don't, that's cool with me, too. Have a good day!
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Posted: 7/16/2013 12:24 AM PDT
PS. I lose interest quickly with fantasy/romance themed work...just fyi.
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Posted: 7/16/2013 12:20 AM PDT
Hi all, Newcomer here. Not begging for "FEEDBACK FOR FEEDBACK!!11" just yet. I'm feeling a bit blocked of late and would be interested to read what other amateur writers have got in the pot and see how it compares to mine. I'll give you a fair critique and maybe share some tips I've learned over the years. By the way: I'll actually read your stuff. I won't skim through the first page and forget about the rest, I'll do my utmost to finish it (unless it reads like a Matthew Reilly novel). Cheers guys.
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