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Posted: 1/8/2014 3:48 AM PST
I posted a few chapters of my novel "Breaking Addiction" and would really appreciate some honest opinions on my writing and some tips if you have any.
Posted: 1/4/2014 5:19 PM PST
Hey! I'm new here as well. I was hoping for some feedback on my story. I'm still not done imputing the other chapters but I will keep adding to it. I just want some thoughts. And if you have stuff you want some feedback on, just say so. Thanks!!
Posted: 12/31/2013 12:56 PM PST
Posted: 12/30/2013 5:14 PM PST
Hey, I'm kinda new here actually, and I'm feeling a little discouraged about my story, so if you could take a look at it, that would be great! It's called Shadow, and I think it's a pretty unique idea, I've never read anything like it, so it's very original, but I would love to hear your feedback.http://www.webook.com/project/Shadow-14
Posted: 12/22/2013 2:11 PM PST
I'll give feedback, could you give some back?
Posted: 12/13/2013 8:02 AM PST
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Posted: 11/30/2013 7:35 AM PST
If anyone can provide feedback for my work "The Vampire's Tutor," I would really appreciate it. I plan on putting up more chapters, but am new here, so I am still learning how to navigate this site. I can certainly provide feedback for anyone looking for it. Thanks!
Posted: 10/17/2013 6:23 PM PDT
I would LOVE some feedback... just submitted my first project on WeBook and anxious to get the ball rolling. I'm only two (short) chapters in, but would appreciate helpful critiques. One rule: NO sugar coating, please. I will be happy to return the favor. Cheers!http://www.webook.com/project/A-Beige-Romance-2
Posted: 9/9/2013 9:26 AM PDT
If you are up for reading a 'short' novel feel free to peruse mine.
Here is the linkhttp://www.webook.com/project/Blood-Wars-The-Angel-of-Death
I am aware of the spelling and grammar issues and I am slowly working through these.
But could use some insight after chapter 1 lol
Posted: 9/8/2013 9:21 AM PDT
Maybe check out my short story? I only have one up and It's a very quick read!
Posted: 7/31/2013 2:09 PM PDT
I know you said you get bored with Sci/fi but i need a honest opinion. Here is the link to my project and first 3 chapters. Let me know what you think.
Posted: 7/25/2013 6:17 PM PDT
"This Project Leader has chosen to be the only author for this project and has not yet made a submission.
Check back later to give feedback and rate."
Posted: 7/25/2013 12:00 PM PDT
Hi, also new and just want someone to read my first chapter (its only 900 words) and let me know what they think.
Posted: 7/21/2013 5:21 PM PDT
I have the first two chapters complete for my project, The Truths About Love, and Id like it if you'd read them.
You don't have to give detailed feedback or any feedback at ll, but Id definitely be grateful, as well as give you feedback on a project in the future.
If you decide to give it a read, thank you. If you don't, that's cool with me, too.
Have a good day!
Posted: 7/16/2013 12:24 AM PDT
PS. I lose interest quickly with fantasy/romance themed work...just fyi.
Posted: 7/16/2013 12:20 AM PDT
Newcomer here. Not begging for "FEEDBACK FOR FEEDBACK!!11" just yet. I'm feeling a bit blocked of late and would be interested to read what other amateur writers have got in the pot and see how it compares to mine. I'll give you a fair critique and maybe share some tips I've learned over the years.
By the way: I'll actually read your stuff. I won't skim through the first page and forget about the rest, I'll do my utmost to finish it (unless it reads like a Matthew Reilly novel).