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Posted: 1/24/2010 7:52 AM PST
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Posted: 1/24/2010 4:55 AM PST
G'day, I'am a newbie at this, really would like some feedback on my first attempt at this writing game. I will return the favour. Check it out, cheers. The backdrop for this story, in essence, is the rivalry between Rome and Carthage, the Punic wars. And as the title suggests, It is also the story of twins. Within the clan called the Flaminii, two sets of identical twins. The brothers, Marcus and Marcellus, followed by the new set of twins, young nephews, Lucius and Quintus. The story begins towards the end of the first Carthaginian war. The events that mould Lucius and Quintus into young men are also the events that ultimately forge Rome into the superpower of the ancient world.
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