lostchildhood

Join Date: 10/6/2008

General details


  • lostchildhood

  • leeds

  • peter



  • English

In short

  • well ive had 5 poems publish in books 2 was for cancer im on poets.com and had 3number1s and one loads off stuff ive had best new commer 2007/8 and had nine editors choice awards... what i write about only others wisper "abuess"
    stillness off the water was num1 for 11weeks and had reviews that made me cry like

    Positive Feedback:
    I like the ripples.People seldom realize that actions have an ever widening effect with the passage of time, and we should always strive to make our own legacy one that uplifts. Even lost children can find themselves when they see the beauty under the tarnish, and even love that's lost forever, if it was once true love for however brief a time, still lost love can exalt the soul and should be cherished 

    Positive Feedback:
     Your rhythm is handled masterfully and I would compare it maybe to that of Tennyson mainly due to the fact it keeps one beat thru the poem or it flows well if you will. I also like the simplicity. It encompasses the Idea that you don't have to use 1000 words to say something in a thought provoking light. I see a man (or even a woman) in a boat on a lake during afull moon on a calm summers night really reflecting on where they went wrong on their love life. I find it to be a very good piece.

My Favorites: Reading and Writing

My PageToFame Badges

This WEbooker is working on earning PageToFame badges.

Community Badges

My Honors

This WEbooker is working on earning Top honors.

My Activity

My Friends (6)