Book Info
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Project Leader:
Kala
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants -
Category:
Poetry -
Genre:
General -
Language:
English
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OUR EMOTIONS
HOW OUR EMOTIONS AFFECT US. IT CAN BE POETRY OR SHORT STORY. ANYTHING ABOUT OUR EMOTIONS , AND HOW WE DEAL WITH THEM, AND HOW THEY AFFECT OUR LIFE.........
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Feelings that flow from the first line and grow throughout are expressed here in ways that many seek to experience, but few find. A great sharing of heart!
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I can relate to that. Very good.
If by some chance you read this, could you check on my poems? I would like to know if these are good enough to be published. Thanks.
If by some chance you read this, could you check on my poems? I would like to know if these are good enough to be published. Thanks.
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Thanks to all of you who have voted for me and the others that will vote for this project ! I really appreciate your support ! A lot of talented writers have summited their work on here !
Good luck, Kala! Thanks for the invite. I clicked publish cause it sounds really good!
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Some good stuff here. Would have loved to submit to this, but good luck in the vote
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Wow, I can't believe I never submitted anything to this one...bummer
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You are a very good writer I love your style. I voted for you please vote for my book "King Loverr: Diary of a Philosophical Loner.
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An all consuming darkness,
fills my heart and soul.
The thought of loosing love again,
is something i cant face.
Anger and frustration
flow through my veins like a river of intensity.
The feeling of dread and loneliness
hits the pit of my stomach
like a tornado.
but do you listen ?
do you listen ?
NO!
Only the worst of man
is implicated towards me.
My good heart and my love;
dismissed like it never existed,
Like every loving glance meant nothing...
but I remember!
i remember ,
every ounce of love was sent
with each
and every
stare."
I remember your breath flowing into mine,
as passion consumed our love making.
My guiding light is dwindling lord,
like a spec on the horizon,
slowly fadind.
I run forwards,
in desperation,
i try to make you see.
A sadness like no other,
pursue's me like the devil on horseback,
that tries to pull me back,
from a path i have chosen
with love,
with faith and conviction.
A path to happyness,
comtentment,
with a woman a soulmate,
with love and goodness in her heart.
My guiding light please listen ,
its me its me.
Please turn round and save me,
the devils at my door.
fills my heart and soul.
The thought of loosing love again,
is something i cant face.
Anger and frustration
flow through my veins like a river of intensity.
The feeling of dread and loneliness
hits the pit of my stomach
like a tornado.
but do you listen ?
do you listen ?
NO!
Only the worst of man
is implicated towards me.
My good heart and my love;
dismissed like it never existed,
Like every loving glance meant nothing...
but I remember!
i remember ,
every ounce of love was sent
with each
and every
stare."
I remember your breath flowing into mine,
as passion consumed our love making.
My guiding light is dwindling lord,
like a spec on the horizon,
slowly fadind.
I run forwards,
in desperation,
i try to make you see.
A sadness like no other,
pursue's me like the devil on horseback,
that tries to pull me back,
from a path i have chosen
with love,
with faith and conviction.
A path to happyness,
comtentment,
with a woman a soulmate,
with love and goodness in her heart.
My guiding light please listen ,
its me its me.
Please turn round and save me,
the devils at my door.
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Thank you for this. All of us really have so much emotion. What better way to show it, through writing!
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Our emotions do indeed affect us; more than people realize
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