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Just three poems I threw together for the WEbook Poetry Vote!

These three poems are collected from the past few months. I feel like I have made some recent changes in my life and these poems can reflect what it is that I have been through. In these past few months, I feel like 20 years have been taken off my life (and I haven't been doing anything too strenuous!) So...let's see how this goes...

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naiveandwitty

8/31/2009 11:44 AM PDT

You have my vote!

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moxhp

8/30/2009 12:07 AM PDT

Interesting….a yes vote from me!

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

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weepingwillow

8/28/2009 4:26 PM PDT

"Repentance" was quite good. It had beautiful images and struck my heart strings.

Good luck!

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul

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Jenny_Moxham

8/22/2009 6:26 AM PDT

You deserve my vote, so here it is!

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

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MsWrite

8/12/2009 4:12 PM PDT

Very good!

http://www.webook.com/project/Heart-Whispers

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tattyhead

8/9/2009 4:39 PM PDT

Very nice Good Luck.

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition

Mine here.

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MarkBrad

8/8/2009 2:33 PM PDT

i enjoyed reading these, well done, good luck

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

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Chelsea214

8/7/2009 3:27 PM PDT

You have my vote!

http://www.webook.com/project/Chelseas-Poems

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tuesday_rayne

8/7/2009 4:11 AM PDT

loved all three.
YES!!!

if you want to find mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you!

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nrhatch

8/6/2009 11:35 AM PDT

General:
Beautiful, especially "When Heart is Not enough."

Imagery:
Haunting.

Musicality:
Gorgeous cadence, tripping along.

Good Luck.

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Ian_20_tkd

8/5/2009 3:59 PM PDT

Another exceptional piece written by an aspiring poet. I can kind of relate to this piece a little as I'm kind of hurting, not being able to get together with this girl I really like. Which kind of sucks, but I go on. As much as it hurts, I still hope that one day there'll be a me and her. A lovely piece of poetry and one that definitely has my vote for publication

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Ian_20_tkd

8/5/2009 3:52 PM PDT

Rich and powerful. A lovely piece of poetry

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