Thank you to everyone for the wonderfull feedback:)
Its greatly appreciated

Voted.

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

I agree with nrhatch in that Starlight sight did seem a little forced at times but I really enjoyed the other two.

Realizations of Truth had some powerful imagery in it, and A Fall From Grace had a cleverness to it.

You have my vote, well done ;)

A good effort. Voted.

If you have the time...

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Starlight Sight sounded a bit forced . . . like you were looking for rhymes, rather than trying to share with your readers.

In contrast, Realizations of Truth said something about the struggle within us all -- the battle of dark and light.  Even though I don't believe in the Devil or Demons, it spoke to me.

Nicely done.

I love your writing... I feel it could be better. Starlight sight threw me at about the third stanza.. the pieces are great, but it seems like a wrench is thrown in them, knocking them off balance. All the writings that I have read in the last few days could use some polishing and a little different wording and yours seemed to be following suit. If you have any questions as to what I'm referring to in yours, jst message me and I will do my best to help.

you have my vote.

Voted.... best of luck... Shah. X

if you have time?

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Best-Three-Poems-WEBook-2009

The first two didn't seem to have enough visual aid to it, the third was a much better one. Keep on strifing!

I like your style.  Here's my vote

"A Fall From Grace" is the best of the 3 IMHO. Best of luck with the vote.... it's good to see well written dark poetry.

great job, all three were interesting and imaginative.
YES to the vote!!!
and good luck to you.


if you want to read mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you!

I like it is is very dark and mysterious with a bit of religion thrown in. A very good combination. You have my vote.

Imagery:
very good u have my vote!!!!

You have an interesting way with words. You have my vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

interesting work, I liked a fall from grace the best.
I vote yes.

http://www.webook.com/project/3-4-poetry-contest

Voted
Wish ya luck

Well done in all three instances. It's hard to make poetry stand out in this competition but I love the way you made all three of these just sing an odd song that nevertheless sound just right. You've got my vote. I leave my link and hope that I have yours. Take care!

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Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

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