Hey man ... older chicks rock!  And bullies suck ... great three here, liked them a lot.
Peace

Your poetry was very refreshing after many I have read here, it is important and personal to you, and deals with matters perhaps that people don't tend to write about, therefore unique and worthy.  Nice job ms Jezabel. Ciao ciao

Fantastic!

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

A good effort. Voted.

If you have the time...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

I read them all and think they could be better with a little better wording and flow. They rhymed very well and the messages being put throughout them is great.

But I have seen many different projects that could have been better and wonder why no one will actually critique them. they read through quick and give a vote. kind of a "i scratch your back, you scratch mine" type of deal. Don't get me wrong these three works are good, but just short of being ready and the best they could be.

If you have any questions as to how they could be better, I'll gladly point out the stumbles that I had and could suggest what could be tweaked. I have been going through so many projects now that it's hard for me to keep track of exactly who wrote which pieces. You can just shoot me a message sometime and let me know.

Sadly, like the last project I went through and read, I can't give this the thumb up. Sorry, but it's little things that can put your writing to it's best.  Good Luck.

Nip and Tuck was bloody hilarious :P

Turn their lives around caused some pathos in me towards those who don't have parents that show enough love to them, nice job.

Why is just simply beautiful, very well done you've got my vote :P

Fantastic trio, Nip and Tuck is a classic, loved it and that is a definite must for publishing, the collection as a whole is very strong, and I say thumbs up , best of luck to you Dante

http://www.webook.com/project/POETIQUE-TIMING

Nip Tuck is my pick of the three.  i feel a bit of a sence of humor in the lesson  Thanks
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote

I was one of them Kids.  Wonderful poems, Nip and tuck ,so true.


 http://www.webook.com/project/Hidden-Shadows

I like Nip and Tuck the best of these -- very clever.

these are all very good poetry and should be published.
I have read them before, and thought I left feedback and voted for them.  But at my age things seem so slip my mind, at any rate they are exceptional and I vote to publish them.

Good luck in the vote!

these are indeed my kind of poetry, good work, well done


http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

Great stuff. I loved the first one.:)

Very good poems, you have my vote, thanks for reading mine.

Excellent! Publish.

http://www.webook.com/project/Poem-of-the-stars

Publish!!!  British Rail is an apt analogy for growing old.  I've just suffered from yet more engineering works this weekend.   ; - )

these are good entries.

Nice poetry.I support it for publishing!

Nice submission jezabel.  You've got my vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

Yes vote!

Definitely my vote.

Good one.  Got my vote.
 Louise

Got my vote :) Definately

Sorry being thick ! didnt realise I coulda put it all in one box lol.
All 3 are great.

Funny

You go my vote  so touching.

A yes vote.

That feed back was on poems 2 and 1 by the way, I think poem 3 was really touching and sensitive

I love this one, it was a good laugh! It's funny 'cause it's true! lol

I love this one, I like the way you take such a topical subject and make it interesting and rhyme it well and a bit funny too, well done

Form:
I like the continuing stanza.

Always a fan of your poetry ... it makes one feel good!  Good luck

Content:
contemporary, in the first two.

Imagery:
Comical; lighthearted

Musicality:
Sing songy for both first two poems.

General:
Aaaah I feel this.

Imagery:
heartwrenching

Tone:
Motherly