50 WORDS NO MORE, NO LESS - SERIES 9

Story must include someone seated, someone standing, and a view of the horizon and be in exactly 50 words - 27th Challenge - IF YOU'RE NEW TO THIS PROJECT - please read overview below! FIFTY WORDS NO MORE NO LESS - ALL OTHER SERIES are currently closed to submissions but still open to reviews.

CURRENT CHALLENGE: Story must include someone seated, someone standing, and a view of the horizon AND be in EXACTLY 50 WORDS - 27th Challenge

Thanks to lakesidewriter for this intriguing challenge idea!

NEW CHANGE - In this challenge you can take your story and extend it to 3 PARTS. Remember just 3!
(don’t forget to mark subs to this challenge with ….your title – P, 1,2,3 and 27th challenge…..)
EACH PART MUST BE 50 WORDS AND FULFILL ALL CRITERIA FOR THE CHALLENGE OR THEY WILL BE REMOVE ... more »

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1/15/2012 5:58 PM PST

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1/15/2012 5:39 PM PST

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Sinder3lla

1/23/2010 12:32 PM PST

He was sitting there having the time of his life he looks around a girl is sitting and looking at the red and orange horizon and her mother is watching the sun set. She stands for awhile and closes her eyes! It was the most beautiful thing she'd ever seen.

Kristoffer

1/19/2010 10:03 PM PST

I forgot the horizon! How do I delete that story?

Kristoffer

1/19/2010 10:02 PM PST

As I sit drinking my coffee, an old man chains up his Sib erian Huskey in front of the steamed up window. Standing before it, the dog vigilantly waits for torn up pieces of bread, yet eats into the pile unsentimentally, like a sports fan digging into a snack bowl.

seagul

12/28/2009 2:42 PM PST

As I lay on my lounger beside the pool I notice that my muscle bound gardener has approached, standing over me shirtless. He seductively leans over and quietly questions what he might do next. Over the horizon I look and reply, " it is time to do me, my gorgeous friend."

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amylily

12/16/2009 2:35 PM PST

Hi, thankyou for the invite but I don't think this project I would be very good at. I don't write stories in 50 words or less and with certain words, i'm sure it's a great site, I just think I would personally fail horribly at it. But thankyou for the offer seems like a cool challange.

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cindi_greene

12/11/2009 3:18 PM PST

Thank you. Well put indeed!

LRStephens

12/11/2009 3:05 PM PST

for future reference to all submitters: READ THE PROJECT OVERVIEW BEFORE YOU SUBMIT A STORY.

If you do not follow the Challenge criteria in your submission(s), it will be pointed out to you and you will be asked to revise it. If you do not revise it after this, IT WILL BE REMOVED. Thats how it works.

The beauty of these projects is the Challenges and the diversity of stories that all the wonderful webook writers come up with while adhering to them.

If a submission of yours is removed for these reasons, please do not be like some submitters and take it out on the people who have worked so hard to keep these projects going by giving 1 Star ratings to their submissions or taking other immature steps to voice your displeasure. Act like an adult, even if you are not one.

It is not the reviewers fault that YOU did not take the time to read what the Challenge criteria is and/or decided you were too good to revise it and make it acceptable for the project when it is pointed out to you.

I do not mean to sound angry, but these issues have come up with submitters being unhappy that their story wasn't received well, when in fact, the only issues with their submission was that they DID NOT follow/meet the Challenge criteria, which is the blood and guts of these projects and what makes them so great.

It is well documented in these projects that our wonderful reviewers will go back and revise their ratings if you do what is asked in these cases.

Anyway, Thanks! And I look forward to all the new stories in Series 9!"

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