Something More

An untold story about highschool romance.

Skylar doesn't have sex it's as simple as that. Why can't guys get over it, she's only been with one man which ended bad. All she wants she someone that wants more then to get in her pants, is that so hard to ask?

Jace is a lady's man, the quarterback,most popular guy in the school, and is going to fail English, and if he does he gets kicked off the team, the tutor seems to be the only girl that doesn't like him.

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Train

1/19/2010 7:44 PM PST

Character Development:
This seems to be an interesting story. Though, I feel that the characters seemed a bit rushed into the plot. In my opinion, you should take some more time to have them develop.

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chloerose

1/6/2010 2:51 PM PST

sounds like a really good story dear :) keep up the work x! i'll definately be reading

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diannestevens

10/31/2009 9:12 AM PDT

[All she wants she someone that wants more then to get in her pants, is that so hard to ask?]---I know what you are saying here but you might want to reword it a little. also, I think you meant 'than instead of 'then'. I do like your plot theme, keep working on it.

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