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A Trilogy of Me
Deep, poignant and all about me
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8/30/2009 8:42 AM PDT
Manifesting Love is my favorite but they are all very good. I'm not a poet but I know what I like! Thumbs up...
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8/28/2009 9:57 PM PDT
You have such a positive feeling in your writing that I find really embracing. I really enjoyed reading your work, especially the last poem, 'Manifesting Love'.
I think it is a thought that we can all relate to and you placed it nicely upon the page.
Your imagery was very good. I could see you on the beach
watching the day's end in the first poem, 'Ocean's Lull'.
It made me miss the outdoor sunshine on my face, and the sand between my toes, which I once enjoyed so much before I got so sick.
But I thank you for the vision.
I voted to PUBLISH!!!!!!
which is a YES vote from me.
take care and good luck.
tuesday_rayne
I think it is a thought that we can all relate to and you placed it nicely upon the page.
Your imagery was very good. I could see you on the beach
watching the day's end in the first poem, 'Ocean's Lull'.
It made me miss the outdoor sunshine on my face, and the sand between my toes, which I once enjoyed so much before I got so sick.
But I thank you for the vision.
I voted to PUBLISH!!!!!!
which is a YES vote from me.
take care and good luck.
tuesday_rayne
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8/28/2009 4:03 PM PDT
Very moving especially the last. I believe that is every person's wish to be held, loved, desired, and needed.
I voted yes
Niyahlove
http://www.webook.com/project/Pain-of-another
I voted yes
Niyahlove
http://www.webook.com/project/Pain-of-another
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8/26/2009 3:33 PM PDT
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8/24/2009 2:58 PM PDT
I voted for you
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8/24/2009 7:33 AM PDT
You know how much I love your writing. Truly astonishing.
Truly inspiring, the very best of luck with the vote!!!
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
Truly inspiring, the very best of luck with the vote!!!
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
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8/24/2009 6:40 AM PDT
All three are good and unique. Publish!
http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest
http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest
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8/23/2009 11:45 PM PDT
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8/22/2009 12:49 PM PDT
Thumbs up!
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8/20/2009 9:44 PM PDT
voted good luck!
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8/20/2009 11:59 AM PDT
good, my only recommendation is to add some imagery to ground your poems and add depth.
good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
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8/20/2009 12:12 AM PDT
Great poems that deserve being published
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8/19/2009 11:04 PM PDT
Great work, I love free verse. You have my vote.
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8/19/2009 8:03 PM PDT
You absolutly have my vote, simply brilliant writting. Congradulations.
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8/19/2009 2:36 PM PDT
this book was amagzing....i really enjoyed reading this book...it should really get published 10 stars
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8/19/2009 1:01 PM PDT
great job. gets my support.
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8/17/2009 4:35 PM PDT
I enjoyed Manifesting Love the most. you have a sweet voice I love forward to reading more
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
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8/17/2009 4:04 PM PDT
A big thumbs up from me. I especially liked the first one. The imagery was astounding. I felt like I was on the beach with you.
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8/17/2009 11:28 AM PDT
I really enjoyed these, being pagan it's hard sometimes to express what we believe and you did it so well, from being one with the source to our paths intertwining together, although I do not believe in coincidinces, and love, it's all around, it's the sources greatest gift to us, it's there for all if we can feel it, personally I think love and sex are two totally different things, nice work, I voted yes
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8/16/2009 1:22 PM PDT
Well witten free verse. Good luck in the contest.
You have my vote.
You have my vote.
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8/16/2009 1:21 PM PDT
My overall impression is that you must be published, your work will some day be compulsory reading in highschool english classes. If we are still speaking it. They may all be using textspeak by then the way were headed. but this will always be a classic. vote yes
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8/16/2009 11:46 AM PDT
you have my vote.
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8/16/2009 10:27 AM PDT
I vote for you.
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8/13/2009 4:52 PM PDT
I can relate to a lot of what you have written about and I enjoy your style fo writing! Yes vote!
http://www.webook.com/project/DCs-Poetry-Collection
http://www.webook.com/project/DCs-Poetry-Collection
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8/6/2009 12:21 PM PDT
You know I like your work, happy to caste my vote!!!
if you have the time....
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems
if you have the time....
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems
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8/5/2009 2:15 PM PDT
Beautifully written poetry. Best of luck. I vote Publish!
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8/2/2009 4:02 PM PDT
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8/2/2009 8:53 AM PDT
You have my vote.
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8/1/2009 11:28 PM PDT
The peoms are beautiful and obviously very sinigfant to you. I really like the way the words flow and how the descriptive power draws me in till i forget where i am. You do well at captivating the audeince.
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8/1/2009 10:34 AM PDT
A yes vote.
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8/1/2009 8:58 AM PDT
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8/1/2009 8:09 AM PDT
the sensual, the spiritual, the relational... great submissions. Good luck.
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8/1/2009 5:38 AM PDT
http://www.webook.com/project/Visions-Of-Publication
Great pieces, you got my vote
Return the favor plz.
Great pieces, you got my vote
Return the favor plz.
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7/14/2009 11:26 AM PDT
all three poems are very good, my favorite is Manifesting love, it appeals to the soul of every woman who needs a lover who is truly there for her and though it seems to last a long time before that one rrives in the life, don't lose heart by losing patience, stick with it and believe HE IS OUT THERE, honey. He will come.
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6/23/2009 8:45 PM PDT
I am defiantly going to vote for you. You have a gift and I think it should be shown to the whole world. Keep up the good job!
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