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Itsmylife
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Category:
Poetry -
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Language:
English
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A Walk in the Clouds is my favorite piece from this collection. You have a keen sense of language that is sophistocated without being condesending. Unlike some, you are not afraid to allow the reader to take the poetry in on their own terms, which is refreshing and afterall, the whole point! Your imagery and comparison speak volumes and you paint with a heavy brush indeed! Enjoyed the pictures that came to mind as I read all three pieces, but am still lost in the clouds! A definate yes to publish. Thanks so much for finding the courage to share your work as now it will have the "protection from the rusting of time"
Very original works with a great use of the English language and startling imagery.
Will look forward to reading more of your works in the future.
The very best of luck with the vote!!!
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
Will look forward to reading more of your works in the future.
The very best of luck with the vote!!!
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
All three are good and unique. Publish!
http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest
http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest
Lovely work, my favourite is Misted Eyes, because it has such an original ending, well all of it is really original and it flows really well and sounds gentle. Great work. All the best hun!
You may like these, and I'd really apprechiate your feedback, http://www.webook.com/project/Jens-three-best-poems-on-mystical-freedom
Jenna
You may like these, and I'd really apprechiate your feedback, http://www.webook.com/project/Jens-three-best-poems-on-mystical-freedom
Jenna
I loved your color of words you used in this poem a walk in the clouds. It reminded me of painting with words and the mind, like a walk amongst great paintings and thoughts of artists. Welldone, yes, Publish please indeed!
http://www.webook.com/project/Memory-Milk-in-3-Glasses
http://www.webook.com/project/Memory-Milk-in-3-Glasses
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