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A Walk In The Park
Nothing too special, not been doing this for too long and really just enjoy putting down thoughts to share.
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4/1/2010 10:30 PM PDT
Today I took a walk outside
Walking bare foot, shaking from the cold air
The crunching noise of the dead leaves
Cold, wet grass under my feet
Everything, brown and green
Waiting for something to stand out
I walked and I walked
A perfect red flower caught my eye
For a second the sun shined on me
I admired the delicate petals
Light and smooth, but weak and breakable
The sweet fragrance it produced
For a minute I felt content
But just for a minute
Now I’m back inside
Back to reality
Back to what I call hell
Still waiting for someone save me
Walking bare foot, shaking from the cold air
The crunching noise of the dead leaves
Cold, wet grass under my feet
Everything, brown and green
Waiting for something to stand out
I walked and I walked
A perfect red flower caught my eye
For a second the sun shined on me
I admired the delicate petals
Light and smooth, but weak and breakable
The sweet fragrance it produced
For a minute I felt content
But just for a minute
Now I’m back inside
Back to reality
Back to what I call hell
Still waiting for someone save me
3/29/2010 11:25 PM PDT
she was just here by me John
where is she
I have looked and looked
where did she go
she was just here
what happen
I thought we were walking
she was just here
where did she go
I thought things where going good
what happen to her
I never saw it coming
what happen
she was just here
I was with her
then I wasnt
where did she go
where is she
I have looked and looked
where did she go
she was just here
what happen
I thought we were walking
she was just here
where did she go
I thought things where going good
what happen to her
I never saw it coming
what happen
she was just here
I was with her
then I wasnt
where did she go
3/29/2010 11:17 PM PDT
moon by me John
I look and I walk
there you are
I see you everwhere I go
do you follow me
do you wacth me
do you even know me
why are you always there
you just sit there
always here
always there
you light my path
why would you light my path
looks and walks
and still you are here
and still your there
looks at the moon
why do you follow me
or is it me who follows you
I look and I walk
there you are
I see you everwhere I go
do you follow me
do you wacth me
do you even know me
why are you always there
you just sit there
always here
always there
you light my path
why would you light my path
looks and walks
and still you are here
and still your there
looks at the moon
why do you follow me
or is it me who follows you
3/29/2010 11:10 PM PDT
title running by me John
I run and run
all I can do is run
I run to her
all I can do is run
I see her and I run faster faster
then she turns into a sign sigh
I see her every wher
everyday I see her
I cant stop running
I am a a rat in a cage
running every day
the gate is locked
run run run
evertwhere I run
everywher I see her
her face is everywhere
I cant run fast enough
she is always there then gone
shes in my mind
in my heart
I cant run fast enough
I run to find the answer
I keep running
I run run run
still no anwer
I run and run
all I can do is run
I run to her
all I can do is run
I see her and I run faster faster
then she turns into a sign sigh
I see her every wher
everyday I see her
I cant stop running
I am a a rat in a cage
running every day
the gate is locked
run run run
evertwhere I run
everywher I see her
her face is everywhere
I cant run fast enough
she is always there then gone
shes in my mind
in my heart
I cant run fast enough
I run to find the answer
I keep running
I run run run
still no anwer
2/21/2010 8:01 AM PST
Very good poems! Just remember, they don't always have to rhyme! Love them, though!
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1/2/2010 3:17 PM PST
I second that, you really are a one of a kind poet.
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7/1/2009 11:42 AM PDT
I've been reading your work and I have to say that you have such a beautiful and kind spirit.
Cheers on the good job!
~Tara_Grania
Cheers on the good job!
~Tara_Grania
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