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A legend of Fire: book one in the "The path to Peace" trilogy
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@H_Carlson, I agree! Also, I'm okay with you commenting on spelling and grammar because you actually used it! Only those who know what they're talking about should give advice on things like that. If you can't spell to make a comment, don't comment on spelling! Use Word for those too!
sorry i wrote this in a rush. didn't get much grammar fixed. i'll fix it soon.
Shanice, I meant 'tweet' as in the quality of the grammar, punctuation, and capitalisation. It wasn't to be taken literally.
Anyways, so as not to make this total spam: the idea is just fine, and I'd be interested to see where you take this. But again, word processing with 'special' features such as grammar and spelling check. They're amazing.
Anyways, so as not to make this total spam: the idea is just fine, and I'd be interested to see where you take this. But again, word processing with 'special' features such as grammar and spelling check. They're amazing.
Whats this about tweets???
Anyway I agree with H_Car;son about the grammar issue capitilising each sentence is not just about making it easier to read its basic english. Also the capitilising of I's
anyways this couldn't be a tweet coz there is a 140 character limit. :p
I suggest prehaps writing it in microsoft word first then copying it and pasting it to here this way its a lot more difficult to have errrors in your work. If not yo just need to give it a proof read
the writing is goood but prehaps i would consider this to be a apart of your chapters rather than an overveiw
just my personal opinion but good just give it a quick proof read and you should be fine but the idea does interest me x
Anyway I agree with H_Car;son about the grammar issue capitilising each sentence is not just about making it easier to read its basic english. Also the capitilising of I's
anyways this couldn't be a tweet coz there is a 140 character limit. :p
I suggest prehaps writing it in microsoft word first then copying it and pasting it to here this way its a lot more difficult to have errrors in your work. If not yo just need to give it a proof read
the writing is goood but prehaps i would consider this to be a apart of your chapters rather than an overveiw
just my personal opinion but good just give it a quick proof read and you should be fine but the idea does interest me x
Grammar and punctuation needs work. If I were you, I'd also consider (very, very much) capitalising the start of each sentence. It makes it easier to read. That, and it looks more like an actual novel rather than a really, really long tweet. I've never understood the point of Twitter.
All in all, I think I'd be more interested in this if you were to pay more attention to those things. I'm sure the idea's great, I just have a hard time caring about something that someone didn't care about enough to take heed to those things.
All in all, I think I'd be more interested in this if you were to pay more attention to those things. I'm sure the idea's great, I just have a hard time caring about something that someone didn't care about enough to take heed to those things.
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