Book Info
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Project Leader:
naiveandwitty
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants (Closed) -
Category:
Poetry -
Genre:
General -
Language:
English
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Aesthetics
Try to be as artistic as possible. Edit your poems as best as possible. And leave your penname, your birth name, or both on your works of art. Lastly, reread your entries at least three times.
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I would just like to thank each of you for taking the time to read a few of the pieces herein. I have most definitely appreciated each response.
In love and peace, Naïve.
In love and peace, Naïve.
As aways profound,well writen, simply beautiful! Good luck!!!
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You are so right we skirt the realities of life great reading all luck mike
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God loves you wrok great writing my gift frined god speed mike
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spitited soul God bless in lofe og]f Jesus sorry I missed this one great writing god bless mike
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This very well-constructed, well-written and just damned good poetry. It deserves to be published.
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It purges me to meditate on such creative words of passion. as one has put it before, you do have a way with words. more power to you; you have my vote..
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You always have my vote :-) You should know this...lol. I pray that they can see in you what I see.
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thats a creepy cat photo.
haha.
i dont understand why ive been invited into this project when its finished.
good luck though
haha.
i dont understand why ive been invited into this project when its finished.
good luck though
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I wish my vocabulary were bigger and my recollection of Classic myths in better shape for I do like the way your poems read. Those of us verbally challenged would not mind it if poets kept a glossary at the end of each piece. I think it would be a win-win. The erudite can skip the glossary, and I would not consider it condescending.
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You are very WITTY with your words,
but certainly not NAIVE at heart...
Enigmatic, Prolific, High-minded and Deep-thinking...
An ancient mystic prophet reincarnated, at best...
I say to thee, WRITE ON...Oh, WRITE-TEOUS One...!
but certainly not NAIVE at heart...
Enigmatic, Prolific, High-minded and Deep-thinking...
An ancient mystic prophet reincarnated, at best...
I say to thee, WRITE ON...Oh, WRITE-TEOUS One...!
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Judging from the vote zone and a few others, this project is decent. So far, I like, "Love's Manifestation". You have my vote.
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Thumbs up from me. There are some amazing works here, very thought provoking. Good luck to all.
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A heavy and intellectual collection yet easy to read.
Please publish!
Please publish!
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=) I didn't know I was that awesome. xD Sophia is my name.
Awesome poem.
Awesome poem.
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Wonderful grovel here! I feel this piece. The elipses gives me the impression that you are pausing/panting these words -- an excellent effect! Great Glen! Peace.
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I just loved the picture of the cat! I have three of them -- two females and one male.
I wished I could have gotten in on this project, but I've been busy writing my second poetry book. Godspeed your success! Peace.
I wished I could have gotten in on this project, but I've been busy writing my second poetry book. Godspeed your success! Peace.
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You are a very good writer I love your style. I voted for you please vote for my book "King Loverr: Diary of a Philosophical Loner.
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