Excellent, you got my vote

http://www.webook.com/project/Poem-of-the-stars

I thought that the description was a bit off. and the title didn't fit either. These are interesting pieces but i feel you have a limited audience. I don't really want to be one who just votes to get a vote. I feel if you don't like it, don't vote for it.. but any vote, whether publish or not publish is still technically a vote. I think the works are ok, but you might want to think of titles and desriptions to be just a bit more suiting to the works inside.

great work


you have my vote.

General:
vote submitted...

here is my link:

http://www.webook.com/project/3-Best

like what you read, leave a vote and or feed-back...

Form:
common...

Content:
stimulating...

My favorite is " Things I found in the dryer "

so true when you have kids or grandchildren...
the things they keep in thier pockets...

Imagery:
excellent in " Rain "

Tone:
for the most part; is calm and tranquill...

All three are good and unique. Publish!

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

"Dryer" stands out to me. At first I thought it would merely be a list, but the last two lines bring in emotion that was not apparent in the rest of the poem. Well done.

good luck!

very interesting style i enjoyed the read

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

General:
The ending to "Things I found in the Dryer" gave it a nice twist.  Before the end, it seemed more like a random list than a poem.

Content:
I like the idea of just waiting for the Rain in life to pass . . . so that the sun can shine once again.

You have my vote!Your poems are a refreshment-they are concise and strong. "Rain" is my favorite due to its almost   tangible imagery. "Things I found in the dryer" is simple but truly original. The last one is strong and takes a bit of thinking. So you made a diverse and interesting trilogy which presents you as a talented and skillful writer.  Good luck with this contention!

Definitely publish!!

PUBLISH!!!


if you want to find mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you.

Has my vote.

Publish!  I like these poems.  They stimulate thought.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

http://www.webook.com/project/Verse-Macabre

Great entries my friend. You have my vote.

~A.J Rodriguez

I voted for these poems, I like your writing
please take a look at mine and see what you think
www.webook.com/project/3-4-poetry-contest

<p><span style="font-family: arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: 16px;">Things I Found In The Dryer<br /><br />bits of bark<br />a button in transition<br />stones thought to be important<br />frayed ends of string, perhaps once tied<br />images<br />More rocks<br />a pistol in the shape of a twig<br />a coin, now cleaned<br />shards of ticket stubs<br />broken edges of memories<br />Fragments of you.</span></p>