Chains of the Eldest: Angels and Demons

A story about the truth and deception, loyalty and betrayal, friends and enemies that begins when a young angel named Rémiel discovers that there is much beyond her sheltered life she does not know when her best friend and maidservant, a human girl named Ana, contracts a deadly virus.

A work in progress.

Rémiel, an angel student of magic and a high ranking noble in the Imperial Capital of Eleon, finds a new world beyond the city's outer walls when her best friend and maidservant, a human girl named Ana, contracts what is known as The Virus, a fatal disease requiring quarantine of all those infected. She clandestinely follows as her father's physician leads the girl through the city's waterways only to be discovered by a troop of angel military police chasing after another ... more »

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Pepper_Mark

3/11/2009 7:22 PM PDT

*cheers* Yay! I love books about angels. I've got some in my story, too. (Some of them are fictional, though, because I don't want it to be "religiously inaccurate" or whatever.)

Anyway... very cool idea. I love the demon scouts and the whole disease thing. I will be back to comment on your other chapters.

Kekea

1/14/2009 3:36 PM PST

Hmm, a very promising novel.

I've wrote a book called Immortal Sin and the angel Remiel is a minor character in it (and Remiel is male in my story!).

I look forward to reading your version of the angelic character!