Angels of the Apocalypse

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corvus

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The WEbook community

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Collection

Type:
Fiction

Genre:
Science Fiction and Fantasy

Language:
English

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Angels of the Apocalypse

A writing project that I need help with.

In the universe there are many tiny specks of stars called galaxies. Around those stars are many tiny chunks of rock and metal called planets. On one of these planets a semi-intelligent existence came into being. They call themselves humans; their planet, earth. Their intelligence allows them to construct greatness but their lack of completion leads them to use it for harm. They follow through a cycle of prosperity and intelligence then - in a chaotic turn of events - destroy all that they have ... More

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SueGrace

8/25/2008 04:04 PM PT

I like your storyline. Very imaginative! The 2nd paragraph is better than the 1st (imho). Should "spec" be "speck"? I might put a hyphen between semi-intelligent, a comma after greatness, & commas before & after "in a chaotic turn of events". Could be totally wrong as I was a science major. Definitely check with someone more qualified than me.
Anyway, keep going! I like it and I think people would want to read more.

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