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Project Leader:
Alienwolfetngu
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Genre:
Crime
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Language:
English
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BLINK
I want to stay away from becoming a monster, but I’ve already done so. I’ve transformed what I knew, whom I was and became this creature of the night stalking people that may or may not be one of THEM. I am overwhelmed with the decay of my psyche, as each monetary death nibbles and erodes my emotions down to bare a flavorless soul. So I do this job of mine not for me, but for the human race. Is it so wrong to want human beings to exist? There will always be problems and killing, but not from thi
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WOW. thiz iz incredible.
but sadly i dun quite like reading crime and horror >..< [coz i get nightmares easily TAT]
i will try to read it thou~
oh WOW you get it published? that's really awesome.
nice work. keep it going~ ^__^
++E. Shadow. X++
but sadly i dun quite like reading crime and horror >..< [coz i get nightmares easily TAT]
i will try to read it thou~
oh WOW you get it published? that's really awesome.
nice work. keep it going~ ^__^
++E. Shadow. X++
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Woa! This sounds good? Is it available in the UK? I want to buy this book ha ha but I guess I'll stick to reading it from here when I get time! This sounds really cool. xx
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Yo your plot is cood but im thinking you may want to tone down the Element of Emonism. Only the twisted minds will read this book. It seems like you are going on a CLIVE BARKER route. Keep doing it, but maybe change the style a little you are not the devil so try not get people to think you are
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wow... so it's finally done and published! I'm so happy you got it completely done. I'm leaving webook, but I'm just going into private writing for a while. Your talent was long recognised, and I feel that you deserved it over anyone else on here. But keep in touch, I might be leaving soon, within a few weeks. But I have taken time to refine my skills, and I've found myself writing hells better. I'm writing at least four times longer chapters, and I feel I'm very ready to put together a more descriptive book. Again, keep in touch. :)
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I won't join the project as I'm bogged down as usual, but good luck - it looks great!
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So i haven't yet read any of the chapters, but already i am interested. this sounds so interesting and really cool. i look forward to reading it. :)
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General:
I love the use and depth of emotive words within this little blurb you could say. It draws the readers in without giving away too much about what's going on. I love how you get a little insight on his modesty, I love the line
"...there is nothing super about me...all I know is how to pull the trigger."
Tone/Voice:
Even without you indicating at the bottom of the blurb, you can tell that this book is a very dark-filled story.
It's almost like poetry written in story-form, without using the usual formats for poetry. Very interesting.
I love the use and depth of emotive words within this little blurb you could say. It draws the readers in without giving away too much about what's going on. I love how you get a little insight on his modesty, I love the line
"...there is nothing super about me...all I know is how to pull the trigger."
Tone/Voice:
Even without you indicating at the bottom of the blurb, you can tell that this book is a very dark-filled story.
It's almost like poetry written in story-form, without using the usual formats for poetry. Very interesting.
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gripping. I love your depth of description and prose although my preference would be to hold it back, using simpler language for a time so that when u unleash ur talent it holds more power. I also found it a little distracting from what was actually going on, sometimes confused in time and space. I noticed a few spelling and grammar mistakes that on revision u will no doubt correct yourself. Ur imagination and perspective of horror are a revelation, i love to read an evil main character and the internal struggle gives him more depth and even (gulp) a little sympathy. I want 2 know more of this reality, and if the apparitions are real or in the mind. Would love more of main characterr background to, altho im sure its in pages to come, or missing 4 a reason. (sory bout txt language im on my phone). The introduction is wonderful and definately gets u in rite away. No real critisism, only preference.Loved it, u do certainly have talent, especially with the macabre. :).
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Oh GAWD~your words are riviting and so smoothly evil. I want to write like this when I grow up.
Wow!
Wow!
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You had me at the picture, will be sure to read a few chapters after work, im sure its a beautiful written book, cannot wait.
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I also love the title, I think its stricking, a blink, with one blink you can miss the whole world. Thats what the tital resembles to me,
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Wow, very creative... my whole family thinks I'm weird because I actually like scary dark things like this. haha, I've actually been in the mood for something like this. Thanks for the invite.
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The title is what really pulled me in. I can't wait to read it!
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I like the sound of this...and I can't wait to get started.
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^ the above sounds really good and also, quite frightening. and im not usually into scary books but im gonna take a look at the first chapter anyway. haha.
good overview, i like it.
good overview, i like it.
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Very interesting inner monologue but not what I would consider a summary or synopsis to your story.
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wow thats is riviting. will read more. the pic is a little disturbing lol
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sounds awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! And scary! Bonus! I can scary my sister=]
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oh my:)
your writing is really good..!
please keep it coming.
your writing is really good..!
please keep it coming.
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In the book, each death is supplied to and circulates in the economy like money.
monetary death made me wonder if you are talking about finances or is it a typo? I guess I'll find out if I keep reading!
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The blurb should be more concise, and should be in the third person, even if the rest is in the first. The goal of writing a blurb is to name the main character and identify a conflict. It's very similar to what good writers do within the first page of the story itself. Also, most of this is passive. "I do" (active) "I am done unto" (passive)
It's a good plot idea, and I like the inner struggle of the character. Once you fix the perspective and switch it to active it'll be shorter, faster paced, and that will really hook the reader.
-Towefin
It's a good plot idea, and I like the inner struggle of the character. Once you fix the perspective and switch it to active it'll be shorter, faster paced, and that will really hook the reader.
-Towefin
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stupid question but did you draw the picture kinda looks like something someone drew....
if you did thats cool
if you did thats cool
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Sounds amazing. I need to get into it and I'll read away. Hope you're up for a hard core review. X
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Make that three occasions.
"I am neither of these things; "
"I am neither of these things; "
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Okay, first of all, you asked ME to review it, so be warned that if I'm in a good mood I am a freak about proofreading and I noticed that on two occasions just in this paragraph you have used commas where there should be semicolons.
the decay of my psyche;
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I am not a hero;
And I've noticed one other thing, although this could stay, it doesn't have to change. It's only a matter of opinion.
When you use the phrase "but not from this invasion of evil, infestation of monsters" I think you should choose one or the other. It just sounds wierd with both of them together like that.
Otherwise, it sounds great, I can't wait to read the rest!
the decay of my psyche;
and
I am not a hero;
And I've noticed one other thing, although this could stay, it doesn't have to change. It's only a matter of opinion.
When you use the phrase "but not from this invasion of evil, infestation of monsters" I think you should choose one or the other. It just sounds wierd with both of them together like that.
Otherwise, it sounds great, I can't wait to read the rest!
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Wow. I really like the sound of the overview. I will get onto reading it soon, but judging from this, its going to be cool.
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LOL...Yes that's the one...But, now I have read the first chapter...No, it is nothing like I Am Legend...I think this book has lot's of originality...Very cool!
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this is going to be a very good book and you have a very good talent on writing books so when we vote i will vote 4 u !!!
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NO its nothing like I am Legend. (the book I am legend is 100 fking times better then that poorly made movie!) lol but ya this is nothing like that... no disease... no zombie vampires... nothing technically wrong with the world. Just Blink sees whats wrong. everyone else does not.
Cool...This sorta reminds me of that Will Smith movie...I can't recall the name at the mo. Good storyline and great title.
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I like the brackets it tells you that this man, almost any man but this man in particular is brought into this strange world, almost saying he didn't choose to be there. nice
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