Book Info
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Project Leader:
Bennyboi
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only -
Category:
Non-Fiction -
Genre:
Inspiration
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Language:
English
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Ben Coleman's Interesting Ideas
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A collection of my thoughts, ideas and implausible theories. A fresh and exciting take on a few things around the world that take my interest. Laugh, giggle and marvel at the in-genius inner-workings of Ben Coleman's mind. Fall to your knees trembling with sheer fear in your hearts as you discover what makes Ben tick! From new inventions to solving worldwide problems, this book covers anything and everything!
Following my love of the modern and developing world, then combi ... more »
A collection of my thoughts, ideas and implausible theories. A fresh and exciting take on a few things around the world that take my interest. Laugh, giggle and marvel at the in-genius inner-workings of Ben Coleman's mind. Fall to your knees trembling with sheer fear in your hearts as you discover what makes Ben tick! From new inventions to solving worldwide problems, this book covers anything and everything!
Following my love of the modern and developing world, then combi ... more »
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Submliminal -> Submliminal
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Submliminal -> Subliminal
Submliminal -> Submliminal
should be
Submliminal -> Subliminal
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I'm putting all the nitpicking about typos here because this isn't really about the individual chapters or the big ideas contained therein. Each individual typo just happens by chance to be in a particular chapter, but I think it makes sense to collect the corrections in one place for reference.
None of this really matters if you're using this project like a blog, just to throw your ideas out there, but if you have thoughts of eventually publishing it as a book, say, then it has to be right. This list isn't comprehensive, by the way. There's a few places where you've missed out apostrophes. I don't think I've caught them all. That's something you need to particularly watch out for. Anyway, here goes:
Free Anesthetic - The Sollution To Pain
Sollution -> Solution
out of site -> out of sight
A Philosophy Of Science
truely -> truly
will live ion -> will live in
look at hings -> look at things
Ben: Looking at the World Differently
I like of myself as unique -> I like to think of myself as unique
some up the unit -> sum up the unit
way to open -> way too open
Ben: Over Thinking Life
minds thoughts -> mind's thoughts
bdy -> body
minds tool -> mind's tool
Ben: Being Nosey
can actually does -> can actually *or* actually does
whilst I was to myself -> whilst I was [laughing?] to myself
someones -> someone's
innuendo's -> innuendos
Ben: Rambling About Words
language and communication has always existed -> have always existed
Ben: Talking about Religion
Not out load -> Not out loud
to trains -> two trains
Ben: Submliminal Messages?
Submliminal -> Submliminal
Becuase -> Because
None of this really matters if you're using this project like a blog, just to throw your ideas out there, but if you have thoughts of eventually publishing it as a book, say, then it has to be right. This list isn't comprehensive, by the way. There's a few places where you've missed out apostrophes. I don't think I've caught them all. That's something you need to particularly watch out for. Anyway, here goes:
Free Anesthetic - The Sollution To Pain
Sollution -> Solution
out of site -> out of sight
A Philosophy Of Science
truely -> truly
will live ion -> will live in
look at hings -> look at things
Ben: Looking at the World Differently
I like of myself as unique -> I like to think of myself as unique
some up the unit -> sum up the unit
way to open -> way too open
Ben: Over Thinking Life
minds thoughts -> mind's thoughts
bdy -> body
minds tool -> mind's tool
Ben: Being Nosey
can actually does -> can actually *or* actually does
whilst I was to myself -> whilst I was [laughing?] to myself
someones -> someone's
innuendo's -> innuendos
Ben: Rambling About Words
language and communication has always existed -> have always existed
Ben: Talking about Religion
Not out load -> Not out loud
to trains -> two trains
Ben: Submliminal Messages?
Submliminal -> Submliminal
Becuase -> Because
This Feedback was...
Is there a way of communicating this that will seem less egotistical? Keep the enthusiasm and let your creative juices flow! I want to want to read this!
You've made me believe that you have great ideas, but I'm turned off by what borders on the grandiose. Of course humorous grandiosity is quite another thing!
The last paragraph is another down-turn for me. Can you "warn" me in a humorous way? If you grab my funny bone I will consider this a must-read.
I think your book ca, and will, be fun and exciting. Your style and originality do much to recommend you.
I hope this is helpful. It is , ultimately, one person's opinion.
You've made me believe that you have great ideas, but I'm turned off by what borders on the grandiose. Of course humorous grandiosity is quite another thing!
The last paragraph is another down-turn for me. Can you "warn" me in a humorous way? If you grab my funny bone I will consider this a must-read.
I think your book ca, and will, be fun and exciting. Your style and originality do much to recommend you.
I hope this is helpful. It is , ultimately, one person's opinion.
This Feedback was...
An intriguing intro, does a good job of drawing the reader further in. Only marred by a few typos:
reasonablley -> reasonably
That, or a person -> that, or a person (ellipses don't mark the start of a new sentence).
... take my interest, laugh, giggle... -> ...take my interest. Laugh, giggle...
(in-genius (for ingenious) is presumably deliberate, but I mention it for completeness)
rediculous -> ridiculous
pepople -> people
love life and live it to the full -> loving life and living it to the full
OR
to get people thinking and learning -> to get people to think and learn
(each part of the sentence is OK on its own, but put them together without modification and they clash)
The following are not that of the truth -> The notions that follow are not necessarily the truth (maybe. The original phrase is ungrammatical and needs revision, but because of that it isn't clear what was actually intended)
If those whom -> If those who
reasonablley -> reasonably
That, or a person -> that, or a person (ellipses don't mark the start of a new sentence).
... take my interest, laugh, giggle... -> ...take my interest. Laugh, giggle...
(in-genius (for ingenious) is presumably deliberate, but I mention it for completeness)
rediculous -> ridiculous
pepople -> people
love life and live it to the full -> loving life and living it to the full
OR
to get people thinking and learning -> to get people to think and learn
(each part of the sentence is OK on its own, but put them together without modification and they clash)
The following are not that of the truth -> The notions that follow are not necessarily the truth (maybe. The original phrase is ungrammatical and needs revision, but because of that it isn't clear what was actually intended)
If those whom -> If those who
This Feedback was...
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