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Best 3 Poems-- Vada
To be considered for the poetry selection. All feedback is greatly apprecieated. I will give the same in return.
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8/30/2009 6:02 PM PDT
Great job! These are really magnificent poems, more specifically "Abby's Airplane to Heaven." Wonderful work.
~Kate
~Kate
8/30/2009 12:16 PM PDT
These poems are powerful and straightforward. The last was my favorite. Ahh, the wisdom of a little child! A definite publish vote from me!
8/30/2009 2:30 AM PDT
Definately publish
8/29/2009 1:52 PM PDT
My hypocrisy Airplane are wonderful nicely done
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
8/28/2009 8:12 AM PDT
i remember reading these.
they were great then and they are great now.
i vote publish.
they were great then and they are great now.
i vote publish.
8/26/2009 4:56 PM PDT
Wow- thank you so much everyone for your kind words. The generosity of all moved me to tears.
8/24/2009 11:25 AM PDT
nice writing, sometimes we do become what we despise, to find that someone who is happy to be with us as we are and to not try to change us is a hard to do and the last one was a sweet piece of writing, children are so pure and free and see reality with eyes wide open, I voted YES
8/23/2009 11:46 PM PDT
8/22/2009 8:57 AM PDT
I forgot to note how much I enjoyed the rythymn of your poetry. Like calming waves, a healthy pulse, gently passionate love-making.
8/22/2009 8:52 AM PDT
I started with Hypocricy, and was little moved although I felt a little empathy. Then I moved to Onward I Go, and I was moved to save the poem to share with others and reread again, especially the chorus, so to speak, "The pain may shake me..." Finally, I was treated to the delightfully childish, damnably, tragically, dramatic Abby's Airplane to Heaven. It will haunt me, I am happy to note. .
8/13/2009 2:16 AM PDT
You got my vote!
8/8/2009 7:43 PM PDT
Great choices for the vote! I hope it turns out in your favor. You've got my vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were
8/7/2009 3:43 PM PDT
Onward I go is my favorite! I love it! made me feel good. Smiles, definatly publish!!
http://www.webook.com/project/Memory-Milk-in-3-Glasses
http://www.webook.com/project/Memory-Milk-in-3-Glasses
8/7/2009 5:49 AM PDT
Content:
Abby's airplane to heaven is so simple yet so brilliant and is the one that made me vote Publish.
However liked them all.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have any time to read mine it would be good.
Musicality:
Onward I go sounds like it could be the lyrics of a song, good choice.
Abby's airplane to heaven is so simple yet so brilliant and is the one that made me vote Publish.
However liked them all.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have any time to read mine it would be good.
Musicality:
Onward I go sounds like it could be the lyrics of a song, good choice.
8/6/2009 12:19 PM PDT
Good luck, Vada.... great choices!!
if you have the time...
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems
if you have the time...
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems
8/5/2009 5:55 PM PDT
amazing poetry!! love it!! i hope you get it published!!!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
8/4/2009 4:32 AM PDT
Absolutely.
Abby's Airplane.... is beautiful.
Abby's Airplane.... is beautiful.
8/3/2009 9:45 AM PDT
General:
Abby's Airplane is terrific, and Onward I Go is a brave look at life.
My hypocrisy failed to persuade me that you were telling the truth about being a hypocrite.
Tone:
Terrific, especially Abby's Airplane -- what a loving little girl.
Abby's Airplane is terrific, and Onward I Go is a brave look at life.
My hypocrisy failed to persuade me that you were telling the truth about being a hypocrite.
Tone:
Terrific, especially Abby's Airplane -- what a loving little girl.
8/3/2009 5:08 AM PDT
8/2/2009 9:22 PM PDT
All the best Vada :)
8/2/2009 11:14 AM PDT
8/2/2009 1:56 AM PDT
A yes vote.
8/1/2009 6:29 PM PDT
ooooooo....great poem...
8/1/2009 9:02 AM PDT
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8/1/2009 7:45 AM PDT
great work, Vada, great work. I especially appreciated the "My Hypocrisy" piece. good luck in the vote.
8/1/2009 5:28 AM PDT
http://www.webook.com/project/Visions-Of-Publication
Great pieces, you got my vote
Return the favor plz.
Great pieces, you got my vote
Return the favor plz.
8/1/2009 5:24 AM PDT
Really loved this poem Vada and having read your profile understand perfectly how you came to write it. you are a very brave young lady.
lol John xox
lol John xox
7/1/2009 12:13 PM PDT
Do you want me to send you some of my poems? I don't quite understand the modus vivendi.
Jonathan
Jonathan
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